100 Words Continuation, May 25, 2018

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“Why am I on the floor?”

Spock shook his head. “Let me help you up.” He stood and reached down to pull Jim up and into his arms. “That is much better, is it not?”

Jim sighed and leaned against him. “Yes. Much. Spock.”

“Yes?”

“It-it happened again, didn’t it?”

Spock swallowed heavily. “To what do you refer?”

“You know. I-I lost it again.”

Jim’s voice was soft and filled with pain. It made Spock ache.

“It is my fault, darling. My meetings took longer than I realized. And I allowed them to talk me into dining with them.”

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8 responses to “100 Words Continuation, May 25, 2018”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Ugh. Man. He’s killing me!
    I am loving this so much!!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Thank you, it is a difficult subject to write about

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  2. Kati Ignatieva Avatar
    Kati Ignatieva

    Oh no… poor Jim… the photo that accompanies today’s piece makes me think that the sensation I got at the previous update, i.e. this story was probably about older Jim and Spock and, alas, some heavy issues that may arise in the old age, is not so far away from reality after all. fantastic writing as usual. Thank you

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yes it deals with Old Married Spirk, there are also clues in the tags. It is a hard subject, but even then there is such love.

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    This is so heartbreaking! Poor Jim, living this way! Poor Spock being the witness to this! Perhaps he can help anchor Jim’s mind with a meld. Are they bonded in this story? If not, perhaps a bond would help. ❤

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yes they bonded years ago when they were young. Unfortunately, the bond doesn’t stop the effects of aging on humans, but Spock does what he can

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  4. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    OH Jim 😦
    I’m glad Spock is with him now

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  5. trekbedtimestories Avatar
    trekbedtimestories

    What’s happening with Jim? – Hope your holiday is relaxing Ivan!

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