100 Words Continuation, May 22, 208

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Spock’s hand shook as he touched Jim’s cheek. “Remember,” he whispered.

He did what he often had to do. Use their bond to remind Jim who he was and who Spock was. Usually morning and afternoons were Jim’s best times. He generally remembered and did all right. And if Spock was with him in the evenings, it never got to this point.

But Spock had been too long.

Jim’s blue eyes cleared, though they still shone with tears. “Spock?”

Spock gave him a gentle smile and allowed his hand to fall. “Yes, darling. It is me.”

 

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6 responses to “100 Words Continuation, May 22, 208”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Oh man. Gah. Killing me.
    So very good.
    Their connection! Beautiful. But gah! My heart!

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  2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
    ivansfanfiction

    ❤

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  3. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    oh oh oh!! Jim 😦
    and yes, their connection ❤

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      I know it’s sad 😦

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  4. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    This is just heartbreaking, but I’m glad Spock can reach him. I’m anxious to see how this develops! Why is Jim in this condition?
    Why is thIs a WIP and 100 words?! I need to see more. I’m enjoying this story, even if you are killing me!!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      LOL yeah it’s not an easy story that’s for sure!

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