Flash Fic, October 06, 2021

What is this place?

Jim stood before the stone structure. It was many stories high and had a large arch opening here at the base of it.

The Beast of Vulcan.

He’d come here seeking adventure after being bored for weeks. His mother had brought him to this planet while she worked there in a lab. Jim had been on Vulcan for three years now and had finished his education, near the top of the class, quite a feat for a Human.

He was old enough, now, to leave on his own and seek his own path in life, which he intended to do, but his mother had asked him to stay just a bit longer, and Jim was bored.

And he’d heard about this place.

A place where a legendary beast was hidden within. Or so the stories went. Some didn’t believe it and most never bothered to go there. Some that had were chased away. None had ever managed to get to the top where it was said the beast lived.

 Jim intended to do just that. With his backpack of survival supplies at the ready, Jim headed toward the arch, determined.

In the middle of the first floor was an old stone staircase. Jim had been told that this was once a mighty fortress, pre-Surak times. Jim climbed it, being careful to watch for weak spots, yet there were none.

The second floor seemed to be a series of old empty rooms devoid of furniture or anything. It was hauntingly lonely, Jim thought.

This time the stars to the next floor were on the side, so Jim made his way to the third floor. So far he had seen nothing nor had he been attacked, but he could hear the faint sounds of movement above him, on another floor.

β€œThe beast?” he whispered.

Of course there was no answer and Jim expected none.

The third floor was similar to the second except there was an ancient table in one room. He also noticed far more evidence of insect activity. He found the stairs and went to the fourth floor. The sounds above grew louder and somehow for ominous.

Jim thought he heard low growling as he moved from room to room but he couldn’t see anything. He was grateful for the flash light he’d brought with him as there were no openings or windows on this floor and he’d be in darkness otherwise.

He was about to put his foot on the stairs to the fifth floor, Jim thought there were two more floors after that for a total of seven, when a hand suddenly grabbed his wrist.

β€œAhh!”

β€œJim, it is me.”

Jim turned, heart in throat, to stare at Spock. β€œDamn it, you scared the crap out of me.”

Spock gave him a disapproving look. β€œI followed you, for I knew you could only be up to no good.”

β€œWell. Not always.”

β€œYes, always. Jim, this place is not safe, please leave with me.”

β€œBut there’s only three more floors until I reach the beast.”

β€œThe beast is merely an illogical legend. It does not exist.”

β€œI heard growling,” Jim suggested.

β€œLikely your stomach for you failed to eat this morning.”

Jim sighed. β€œBut, Spock…no one’s ever gotten to the top.”

β€œIt is a broken down old dwelling that could crumble under your feet at any time. I would like us to make it to Starfleet Academy in one piece.”

Jim let his words sink in. β€œWait. You’re coming with me? But I thought the Vulcan Science Academy—”

β€œI turned them down in favor of Starfleet.” Spock paused. β€œAnd you.”

Jim smiled and leaned in to kiss his boyfriend. β€œNow that’s most excellent news.”

β€œLeave this place, Jim. If it is adventure you seek, we will surely find it together in Starfleet.”

Jim looked at the stairs going up regretfully. β€œAll right. But it might have been fun. Beauty and the Beast, you know?”

β€œI suppose you are the beauty.” Spock directed him toward all the exits.

β€œDuh, of course.”

β€œI can find no illogic in that statement. You are singularly attractive.”

When they reached the ground floor, Jim switched off his flashlight.

β€œI am relieved,” Spock admitted.

β€œYou aren’t afraid of the beast legend, are you, Spock?”

β€œNot truly, no. But there are tales within my family that one of my father’s brothers came here and never returned.”

They stepped outside and Jim saw that Spock was quite relieved.

β€œYou really were worried about me going up there, weren’t you?”

β€œIt is logical to be cautious and concerned where one’s mate is involved, Jim.”

Jim smiled. β€œAll right. Let’s go home then. I am hungry.”

And as Jim and Spock walked away from the Beast’s lair, on the seventh floor, looking down, the Beast roared.

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11 responses to “Flash Fic, October 06, 2021”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Heh. β€œWhere one’s mate is concerned”. Perfection.

    Nicely done with the spooky vibe setting everything up. I wasn’t sure if I wanted him to reach the top or not! Love it.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Right probably not a good idea! LOL

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  2. J Avatar

    Good god man, as Bones would say. You have Spock for a mate and yet you’re BORED?
    Fine. I guess a super hyper active brilliant Jim would have to have a little more excitement in his life than just Spock. Until Starfleet anyway. I guess.

    Beauty and the Beast, indeed.

    But that’s an awesome flash. I was right there with him on every step. From the safety of my desk, with my huge coffee in hand. Otherwise, nope. Not me. Huh uh. Not even onto the grounds much less through the first archway.

    These are so much fun!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Well sure. Spock can’t be with him 24/7 (damn it) so there are times he gets bored. And imagine, I doubt any of those snooty Vulcans are Jim’s friends, so he spends some time alone deciding to do foolish things like search for the Beast.

      Funny at first I thought about making Spock the beast, you know a Pre-Surak thing, and then as I was writing it, suddenly Spock was there, stopping Jim from being an idiot. Strange how sometimes your own story/writing changes on you!

      Me too. No way would I go in to a creepy house/fortress. Nope

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      1. J Avatar

        Oh yeah, of course I too thought Spock would be a surakian beast who would keep Jim as his pet. I mean, who wouldn’t? (keep Jim as a pet, I mean!)

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      2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
        ivansfanfiction

        exactly! but yeah it didn’t end up that way

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      3. J Avatar

        I mean, BEASTS get bored too, right?

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Great flash! I first read it this morning and didn’t have time to comment. Definitely nailing it with the creepy atmosphere. I really thought that Spock was going to be the Beast 😈, under a witches πŸ§™β€β™€οΈ spell doomed till his T’hy’la πŸ’• finds him. Great surprise when Spock appeared and stopped him from venturing into danger. Spock really has his hands full watching over a bored Jim. I’m sincerely happy they are already in a romantic relationship! Great job on this flash! Kudos to you and your fertile imagination! β€οΈπŸ’šπŸ˜˜πŸ––

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yep my initial plan as I said was to make Spock the beast but my imagination went a different route here!

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  4. Jay Avatar
    Jay

    β€œIt is logical to be cautious and concerned where one’s mate is involved, Jim.”. Especially when that mate is James T Kirk lol

    This was so good. I loved the mystery and suspense. And the ending :O

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Thank you! πŸŽƒ

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