Flash Fic, October 12, 2020

A bit of TOS. It’s not really that related to October/Halloween/Harvest but I threw in some mentions to make it work!

β€œIt was a dark and stormy night.”

β€œWhy?”

Jim lowered the book and gazed at the small Vulcan child peering up at him from his seat on the floor. Jim was sitting in a chair. The child, Saran, had informed Jim he would sit cross-legged on the carpeted floor.

β€œWhy what?”

β€œWhy was it dark and stormy?”

β€œUh. I don’t know. That’s just how the story starts.”

Saran eyed him but nodded.

Jim cleared his throat. Babysitting Vulcans. Ugh.

β€œSoon he heard an ominous noise outside his window.”

β€œWhy was it ominous?”

β€œBecause he didn’t know what the sound was.”

β€œThen it should say, soon he heard an unknown noise outside his window. He decided to investigate.”

Jim sighed and closed the book. β€œI don’t think you’re in the mood for a ghost story.”

Saran sniffed. β€œGhosts are illogical.”

β€œSure are. So what else would you like to do, Saran?”

β€œYou could tell me about your exploits.”

Jim paused. β€œMy exploits.”

β€œYou are a famous starship captain.” Saran paused. β€œOr so I have been told. You must have exploits.”

Jim opened his mouth to reply, but then was saved by the sudden appearance of Amanda, Spock’s mother.

β€œOh! Here I am. I’m so sorry, Jim, I didn’t mean to be gone for so long.” She came to him and clasped his hands. β€œSpock’s on his way back now. Thank you for watching Sarek’s nephew.”

Jim smiled. β€œYou’re welcome.”

She leaned in to whisper, β€œHe’s at a bit of a challenging age. It was kind of you to watch him. And I really hadn’t intended to be gone so long.” She patted his arm. β€œWhy don’t you go and wait on the covered terrace for Spock? I’ll send him out there when he comes.”

He tried not to be too relieved as he made his escape out to the terrace. There was a pitcher of cool water out on a table there, so he helped himself to a glass.

Jim had been rather surprised at the invitation to join Spock on Vulcan after they had saved the Earth from impending disaster. Again. Jim didn’t even feel the slightest bit bad about being demoted back to Captain. The admiralty hat hadn’t ever quite fit him.

It seemed that Spock, though he had gotten many of his memories back, he hadn’t gotten them all.  There was a vague memory there, Jim supposed, of their past intimacy, but not enough to convince Spock to reestablish anything. Or so Jim had believed, until this recent invitation.

The door on to the terrace opened and Spock stepped outside. He was wearing those Vulcan robes he seemed to favor on the planet. This was a short visit before they would return to duty.

β€œEverything okay?”

β€œIndeed.” Spock came to stand near him. Jim had been viewing some plants in pots there. β€œMy mother’s garden. She has another garden in the back yard.”

β€œYes, she showed me earlier. Told me there’s no real harvest time like there is back in Iowa.”

β€œYes. I do apologize for staying away so long today. Mother informed me you were required to watch Saran for a time.”

Jim chuckled. β€œYep. Not sure I’m very good with children. Probably a good thing Carol kept David from me.” His smile faded, his mood now melancholy.  

Spock, of course, knew. β€œI am sorry, Jim. For the horrifying loss of your son.”

He nodded, turning away. β€œThe pain is manageable.”

At least I have you, Jim thought.

It wasn’t in the same capacity of what he’d been used to, what he wanted. But it was something. Yes. He would have Spock however Spock would allow it.

β€œI tried to read a ghost story to Saran,” Jim said, changing the subject.

β€œA ghost story, Captain?”

β€œOctober, Mister Spock. The month of Halloween.”

β€œAh.” Spock nodded. β€œI recall.” He gestured to two chairs. β€œWill you sit with me? There is something I would like to discuss.”

Trying to stem his curiosity, Jim took the seat and waited as Spock sat beside him.

β€œI would like to discuss us.”

Jim glanced at Spock’s face, trying to read what that meant. He was unsuccessful in figuring it out. β€œUs?”

Spock held his hand up in the air toward Jim, who’s gaze zeroed in on it. He swallowed. He must have hesitated too long for Spock began to lower his hand, his brows furrowed. Jim hastily thrust his hand out, rather clumsily, and touched his fingers to Spock’s.

β€œIt-it’s been a long time for that,” he whispered.

β€œIs it unwelcome?”

β€œNo.” Jim paused, feeling hope spring up in his chest. β€œNo.”

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14 responses to “Flash Fic, October 12, 2020”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Oh this. Happy sigh. I loved the beginning and Saran being so Vulcan. And then. You just melted my heart with that ending. Lovely fic!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thank you

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  2. Jay Avatar
    Jay

    Jim had been viewing some plants in pots there. β€œMy mother’s pot garden.

    So my mind completely skipped the first line and read mother’s pot garden and I thought ‘dang, Amanda growing Mary Jane on Vulcan?!’ lol

    I quite liked this. Jim trying to tell Saran a ghost story and the child questioning it πŸ™‚
    And Spock wanting to continue their relationship and the Vulcan kiss ❀

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Right I knew someone would think that and I meant to take that out. Will do so now.

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      1. j Avatar
        j

        ARGH! WTH?????? Where’s the next line??????? Paragraph? You know…..???

        I was just scrolling down to the next sentence and…behold, there wasn’t one I gotta sit down. Oh, I already am. My heart like, skipped a beat when I saw the grayish/blue banner that says, that’s it.

        Ok, I can do this. Expectation is a weird thing!

        This is awesome, yeah, even without another sentence. Saran is quite Sarek-ish! haha

        My fave line: β€œYou are a famous starship captain.” Saran paused. β€œOr so I have been told. You must have exploits.”

        As if, Saran thought maybe they lied to him if Jim was reading illogical material? haha

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      2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
        ivansfanfiction

        Yes that is the real ending. Just with the hope of Spock and Jim reconnecting! HA HA. I tried to think of a different ending to this but liked it to be rather vague but positive. And they couldn’t be too demonstrative on Vulcan after all at Spock’s parents home.

        I think Saran was very skeptical of Jim’s status as a heroic famous starship captain, the little stinker! πŸ™‚

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      3. j Avatar
        j

        I definitely don’t advocate for drugs. But being married to Sarek, and being surrounded by those like Saran….well…..I could understand it.

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      4. ivansfanfiction Avatar
        ivansfanfiction

        snort, yeah me either, but indeed. One wonders with the way Sarek takes in strays if Saran has now become his responsibility (and therefore Amanda’s).

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      5. Jay Avatar
        Jay

        No, keep it. It’s cute πŸ™‚

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      6. ivansfanfiction Avatar
        ivansfanfiction

        I already took out the “pot” garden, but thanks. I don’t find it cute at all. To each his own. ❀

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Second attempt at a comment. First one disappeared! πŸ€·πŸ»β€β™€οΈ
    I very much enjoyed this flash. But yes, my mind went there too. Amanda is β€œsmokin’ weeed.β€œ Lol! I don’t indulge in it myself, but you never know. Maybe it’s for medicinal reasons, like to face living amongst a bunch of Vulcans. Lol! Love the very literal-minded little Vulcan. Cute, but exasperating! What a tough audience for Jim’s story-telling! Can only imagine what comments Jim would get regarding his exploits! Reminds me of Spook’s nephew Varek (is that the correct spelling? Idk!)
    I also need more of this. Like the rest of their evening! Wink-wink!!
    β€οΈπŸ’šπŸ˜˜πŸ––

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      appreciate it but this is most definitely the entire thing

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  4. jesco0307 Avatar

    What a happy ending! I can only imagine having to read a ghost story to a Vulcan kid. I still remember the “why?” phase in horror. πŸ™‚

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      ha ha yes, can’t get anything past those Vulcans. πŸ™‚

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