Honestly at this point, I don’t think I am doing this quite right because I think the 100 words are supposed to contain an entire story AND I am certainly not doing that here, but I’m committed now, so here we go!
If it was someone other than Spock, Jim was pretty sure he’d have to bash their face in. Not very captainly of him.
“Computer, identify visitor,” he called softly as he heard the door chime.
“Commander Spock.”
Jim closed his eyes and put his hand to his stomach as he exhaled slowly.
Get it together, Jim.
Opening his eyes, he said, “Come in.”
The door slid open and Spock stood in the doorway dressed impeccably in his uniform. Not a hair out of place.
Or was there? On the left side one hunk of hair looked a little tweaked.
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6 responses to “100 Word Continuation 04/08/2018”
Maybe not. Heh. But oh god do I love this story, and I love getting it in little tiny bits. It builds the tension and the anticipation. So good.
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Oh I do so enjoy this development! Sounds like Spock has had “his feathers ruffled” so to speak! The emotionless Mr Spock can’t maintain that facade! I’m looking forward to the next installment !
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Yes I think our Vulcan is ruffled indeed! 🙂
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God I do loves these 100 words. Each part has me hooked and wanting the next part! Loving this so much!
Finally they are face to face!
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Thank you and yes! They finally are. 😀
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