100 Words Continuation, April 06, 2018

contemplative

Jim wasn’t good at waiting. All his life if he’d had to wait, he made something happen. But he didn’t know what to do this time. Well, he supposed he’d done it by confessing his feelings to Spock, however, ill-advised.

He made himself some tea, herbal, because he figured he was hyped up enough as it was. And he wondered if maybe Spock would ignore his message. Pretend he hadn’t seen it until the next day or something.

But his heart nearly stopped and his breath stilled in his chest when footsteps, soft yet sure, paused outside his door.

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6 responses to “100 Words Continuation, April 06, 2018”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Holy crap! My heart gave a leap.

    I am so loving the way you’re building this story. I’m on the edge!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks!

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  2. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    !!!
    Cliffhangers! I love it! I need more!
    Oh man this is sooo good!!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      ha ha, next part is up Sunday evening 🙂

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Arghhhh! Need another 100 words…. takes slingshot course around the sun to go forward to Sunday.
    Love the build up! ❤

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      It will be here before we both know it! ❤

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