100 Words Fic Friday

This is all I can manage right now my friends. Enjoy!

poopsie

 

The sun was at his back and he heard the sound of running water from…somewhere. His voice was still hoarse from yelling for the rest of the landing party—anyone—to hear him. There had been no answer and he could not shake the feeling that he was alone. They’d definitely been separated. But somehow it felt as though he was the only living thing around. He could only hope that meant they were somehow back on the ship and not…gone. And he could only hope that somehow, up on that ship, Spock would be looking for him.

 

 

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14 responses to “100 Words Fic Friday”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Of course Spock’s looking for him!
    The power and emotion in just those few words. Gah. So good!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks 🙂

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  2. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Spock will always look for him. And Spock will always find him. 🙂 ❤
    Beautiful words. This sounds like it could be a longer story.

    Thank you for these words! ❤

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  3. ivansfanfiction Avatar
    ivansfanfiction

    It does sound like that ha but thank you

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  4. trekbedtimestories Avatar

    Nothing like some desperate/hurt Jim to start my day!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yep, you know there’s nothing I like more myself

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  5. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    Oh man! This was short and sweet…well, not sweet but angsty and they were separated and…I want more! 🙂

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      LOL, that’s the fun part of these 100 word things, 🙂

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  6. Alex Avatar
    Alex

    You actually make it seem really easy with your presentation but I find this matter to be actually one thing which I think I’d by no means understand. It kind of feels too complicated and very extensive for me. I’m having a look forward for your subsequent put up, I’ll try to get the grasp of it!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks 🙂
      Well you certainly can’t write an entire fic with 100 words but it is intriguing to work with!

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  7. Alex Avatar
    Alex

    Nice weblog here! Also your site loads up fast! What web host are you the use of? Can I get your associate link in your host? I wish my site loaded up as fast as yours lol

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      i actually just use the free wordpress blog, nothing special at all 🙂

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  8. Alex Avatar
    Alex

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  9. Bridgette Mcneil Avatar
    Bridgette Mcneil

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