100 Words or Less Flash

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He watched as the sandy-haired man glanced his way, his blue eyes widening just slightly. Perhaps in recognition. Perhaps that was more than he could hope for. After a moment the man’s gaze drifted away, back to the coffee cup in front of him.

He tamped down his disappointment. Somehow he should have realized that this would not be that easy.

He hovered in the doorway of the seedy café, wondering if he ought to enter. But he could not resist the pull of the man seated at the counter. He approached. Blue eyes flashed to him.

“Jim.”

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6 responses to “100 Words or Less Flash”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Oooh! A Drabble and and intriguing one at that. Well done!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thank you!

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  2. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    Yes, very intriguing. Loved that you kept it 100 words or less. But now I want more 🙂

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      HA HA thank you!

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Oh you tease! First that dreamy photo of Chris!! Seriously hard to scroll past it…. Then this opening to a story. Love it! Enough to make me “pine” for more! 😉
    ❤

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      LOL yes a total tease

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