100 Words Continuation, 05/18/2018

 

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At first Spock didn’t see him and the panic began to set in again. But then as he was about to turn away and perhaps search for him in their bedroom, he spotted the huddled, hunched figure on the floor in the corner just past the windows.

Spock was filled with a mixture of relief, guilt, immense love, and concern. He hurried to the corner and knelt beside Jim.

“Ashayam.”

Jim, who’d had his face buried in his knees, looked up at Spock. Even with the limited light from the windows, Spock could see Jim’s face was streaked with tears.

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8 responses to “100 Words Continuation, 05/18/2018”

  1. Kris Avatar

    You are killing me with the feelings.
    My heart!!
    So good. So very good.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thank you

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  2. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    Jim!!!! OMG!!!
    Yes, my heart, you’re killing us! But I’m loving it!
    Cannot wait for the next part!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks 🙂

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Oh no! What’s wrong?! Poor Jim!! What has upset him so much? Is Spock somehow the cause? Or does Spock just think that he is the cause? You’re seriously killing me.

    (Talking/plotting to myself… Must hypnotize Ivan to get him to keep posting to this story. ) So, ah Ivan aren’t you feeling sleeeepy? You’re reallllyy sleeeepy. Now type dammit!! ❤

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Next part will be up Tuesday the 22nd! 🙂

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  4. Kati Ignatieva Avatar
    Kati Ignatieva

    Tuesday???? Ohhhhh seems so far away :-0 we’ll arm ourselvs with patience… 😉

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      It will be here before you know it!

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