100 Word Flash Fic Friday, 02/02/2018

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If the captain died, then Spock would be captain. He did not want to be captain.

No. That was wrong. Certainly who would be captain if-if…the captain died was not what he should be thinking about.

If Nyota had known what sprung to his mind, she would slap him, and he would deserve it.

If the captain died, then Spock would be…alone. Lost. Have wasted time not revealing to the captain just how much Spock—

But no. The captain would not die. There would be time.

“Spock?”

Spock stood up, barely able to breathe.

“He’ll be all right.”

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7 responses to “100 Word Flash Fic Friday, 02/02/2018”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Gah! The feels! Well done.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks, glad you liked it 🙂
      I do think I am done with the 100 words for a while

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  2. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Wow! Spock would be lost indeed. Spock must tell Jim of his feelings when he recovers. Living with the regret of never confessing his true feelings would haunt him, if the captain died.
    Powerful fiction, Ivan! Thank you for sharing this.
    ❤ Hope your having fun on your cruise!

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      ivansfanfiction

      thanks for reading!

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  3. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    The feels! Damn! Short and…oh my heart.
    This was so good

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      ivansfanfiction

      thanks 🙂

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      1. yaoichan12 Avatar
        yaoichan12

        you’re back!!!!! yay!!

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