March 30, 2021 Flash Fic

“I have the great Kirk where I want him.” The Gorn put a scaly hand on Jim’s battered, swollen face. His other hand jabbed Jim in his injured stomach. “I’m going to split you open and cook your meat over an open fire. We will dine on your flesh tonight.”

“And here I thought you were vegetarians.”

The Gorn hissed. “Your insolent bravery will soon be replaced with cries for mercy.”

The whir of the transporter had Jim grinning, bloody teeth and all.

“Or not.”

He reappeared on the Enterprise and collapsed to the ground.

“What took you so long?”

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16 responses to “March 30, 2021 Flash Fic”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Perfection in a Drabble! This was everything. 🙂

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Thank you!

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  2. j Avatar
    j

    So good. I love this premise!

    You know, I never took time to notice. That’s really a cute little outfit that Gorn had on! I wonder if any designer used it on a runway model, since they’ve used the Mudd’s Women designs all through the decades? I’d lose the belt, but I’m not a belt person. 🙂

    Jim’s mouth – good news and bad news, huh? Gets him in (and out of) all sorts of trouble, but he always wants to go down swinging.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      It’s an interesting little jumper outfit for him to wear for sure. I couldn’t find an AOS Gorn so I used the TOS version figuring they would be similar. Yep, Jim sure can’t help himself!

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      1. j Avatar
        j

        Talk about the biggest, largest, HUGEST malarkey baloney in the galaxy about the gorn: http://uss-theurgy.com/w/index.php?title=Gorn

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      2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
        ivansfanfiction

        Kinda cool though ha ha
        And it does say they would eat Jim

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    I loved that Jim’s first comment when rescued, was a snarky complaint! “What took you so long?” I’m sure it’s addressed to Spock, who was overcome with worry about Jim! Spock’s only outwardly emotional response would be the raising of one eyebrow. Lol! That Gorn, although stronger, had met his match. Jim wasn’t going to back down, even when backing down might help.
    I agree with j, I bet that outfit as used again. The TOS costume department was definitely frugal! I guess they had to be, just to keep Captain Kirk in shirts! LOL!
    ❤️💚😘🖖

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    1. j Avatar
      j

      You made me giggle!

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    2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yes I can hear Spock going over how he had to calculate this and that and Jim replying oh shut up Spock. HA HA

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      1. j Avatar
        j

        The Gorn moved incredibly fast, Jim.

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  4. j Avatar
    j

    ST: Enterprise Gorn https://i.postimg.cc/W3KptzGZ/ST-Enterprise-Gorn.png
    (See if this works)
    In ENT’s mirror episodes.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      now that looks weird

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  5. jesco0307 Avatar

    Of course that’s his reaction, lol. Brilliant!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thank you, I am rather proud of this one 😀

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  6. Jay Avatar
    Jay

    SOrry this is a day late commenting on!

    This was good! And totally a thing Jim would say after being beamed back 🙂

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      🙂

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