“Captain. Are you all right? Captain?”
Jim came to with the sound of Spock’s question ringing in his ears. The pain was almost unbearable. He clutched at Spock, who suddenly hovered over him.
“Spock…God, it’s…I can’t.”
“Hang on, Captain. Help is on its way.”
“Don’t…” Jim sucked in a breath. “Not going to…”
“You will. It will not be long.”
“No. Spock…I-I’m sorry. I wish…”
“Jim! Jim! No. Jim. Jim.”
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24 responses to “Super Flash 2”
Dude! Stop it! Making my heartbreak.
Don’t actually stop. I love these flashes of all the feels!
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In my defense, I was asked to continue it. Did they say they wanted a happy ending? LOL 😀
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dear whitehouse.gov
I would like to post a national petition against ivanw writing stories with chapters, that end in cliffies. I would like cliffies to be outlawed, period, around the planet. Maybe on Vulcan too, but that’s for future debate.
I know this means no more soap operas, but really, there’s only like 3 still in existence, and who would miss them anyway?
In conclusion, this ivanw is a menace to society’s emotional health and he is trying to kill us, one update at a time. I feel there must be something a great national movement could do.
Sincerely,
Reader who did not have PTSD until she discovered this Ivanw guy, who just rips my heart out, stomps on it with cleats (he must have football anger issues in his past), and laughs this maniacal bwa ha ha when I beg him to stop.
I am only one, but I am one.
And I am old, and I could like, have a heart attack and die, and he would feel guilty.
Surely he would?
Ok, well, somebody would!
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LOL, hopefully that does not cause them to look at this site!
Now who said it was a cliffie/ Maybe it ends with Jim’s unfortunate demise?
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Are you kidding? Death wouldn’t be the end of JTK. He’d have to come back and haunt Spock, to at least finish his sentences.
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LOL HA HA HA HA
Alas there is no gnat emoji darn it
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I’m signing the petition too! I agree with everything said by (or is my DIL paying him to end me sooner????).
Listen Mister, I’ve just come off of binge watching the entirety of Stranger Things three seasons over the last several days with my oldest daughter. . Cliffhanger after cliffhanger. I have like seriously had enough. No more cliffies! And No killing off K or S . The buck stops 🛑 here! This cannot be the end of JTK! So get typing buddy! Like pronto! Fix this! I’m waiting. Not going anywhere. (Tapping my foot, with my arms crossed.)
😘
Still waiting! ❤️
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But it’s not a cliffie if that’s the end! HA HA.
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You and your cliffhangers! I do enjoy them and the feels of OMG! SERIOUSLY???? they bring up LOL
Need more!
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See above. It’s not a cliffie if it’s the end!
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Still waiting for you to fix this. I’m wearing out my floor tapping my foot!
Or else you’re grounded and no dessert for you. Lol!
But seriously, you’re killing me/ us! ❤
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I am RIGHT THERE WITH YOU. I have my picket sign – I made enough for everyone, plus brought paints and glitter and sparkles and flowers in every color so you can personalize yours. I’m marching proudly, indignantly, around Ivan’s computer at this very moment. And I’ve memorized all the most popular chants, practiced really loudly – I’m a trained singer – great diaphragmatic muscles. (Can hardly walk, but man I can yell)
Hell no, we won’t go! Till you fix this so we know!!!
What do we want? Fix Jim and Spock!
When do we want it? Now!
And if we don’t get it? Yell some more!
I say NO CLIFFIES, you say power!
No cliffies!!! Power! No cliffies!!! Power!
Show me what Spirk community looks like!
This is what Spirk community looks like!
Escucha, escucha! Estamos en la lucha!
(Not sure what that means, but it was next on the list when I googled protest chants! And it sounds really cool!!!)
Escucha, escucha! Estamos en la lucha!
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IF they are fixed, which is a very big IF, it wouldn’t be before Wednesday’s extra flash (if there is one, which I am not saying there is).
Don’t you guys get Jim died! Because Spock wouldn’t tell him he loved him back! Just like in INTO DARKNESS
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Don’t you get that, as Mythbusters’ Adam Savage said, we reject your reality and substitute our own.
THEY LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER. AND SPOCK PRIME GOES TO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH KIRK PRIME IN THE NEXIS instead of stupid Generations’s ending.
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Well yes I agree that the Primes lived happily ever after and Generations never happened.
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I remember enough of my Spanish training to know it’s Listen, listen, we are in a….something.
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He died! LOL
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Ok, new chant.
FIX IT SO JIM LIVES!!!
FIX IT THE WAY WE WANT!!!
FIX IT SO JIM LIVES!!!
FIX IT THE WAY WE WANT!!!!!
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But everyone must die! We shall see. Maybe Jim lives and Spock dies…huh
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Ok, I shall compromise with you. As soon as you get notification that I am, indeed, dead, you may kill off whomever you wish. IF the other guys here agree.
who’s with me?
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Hmm…Perhaps. Although I have already killed off both in prior fics but I suppose those won’t count, it will be just going forward
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I sat in a crowded theater twice and watched both men die and suffered through that. AND I watched Chris die in WW. You know I don’t handle character death well!!!! So…..it’s all on you, friend!!!
And yeah, I already screamed and cried over those you wrote, but they were both before my time, and way too late for me to do any chanting about.
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Yes, I know you did. And one Jim at least for to have Prime. And in the one where Jim dies, that I am thinking of, Spock just listens to a sad sad song about baby having blue eyes. Oh and there’s one where he makes Jim a cake too and Jim is gone. That might be the same one-shot. There’s been so many who can keep track? Not I!
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FYI estamos en la lucha I cheated and googled it , don’t tell my high school or college Spanish teachers, means we are in the fight.
INDEED we are, no K or S deaths on my watch!
I’m holding my protest sign in the air here.
🙏🙏 🙋🏻♀️ 🥾🥾= my shoes wearing out
🤬😡
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