Flash Fic Friday, August 02, 2019

Jim reads fan-fiction about K/S and Spock catches him (thanks for the prompt ES, was a fun one)

β€œWhat are you doing, Captain?”

Jim jumped what surely was ten feet in the air. β€œSpock! Shit! You scared the crap out of me.”

Spock frowned at Jim, who was sitting tucked away way in the corner on a couch in the mostly empty recreation room. β€œWhy would you be frightened?”

β€œWell. Not scared. I know you aren’t going to strangle me or anything. Not this time.” He winked and was pleased when Spock’s cheeks turned green. He then looked guiltily down at his PADD. β€œUm. I-I was reading.”

β€œReports? If you are behind, I can assist you.”

β€œNo. No. Not reports. Something…something else.”

There went the head tilt. β€œYou read β€˜real books’ as you call them when you read for pleasure. Is there some troublesome matter at home that you received a message?”

β€œNo.” Jim put the PADD face down on the table, feeling very embarrassed and definitely flustered and frankly a bit turned on. β€œStuff online.”

β€œOnline.”

β€œThere’s this site where, um, people write things.” Jim rubbed the back of his neck. β€œThere’s-there’s a section about us.”

β€œThe Enterprise?”

He traced his lips with his tongue. β€œNo. Us. You and me.”

Spock stared. Suddenly he reached for Jim’s PADD before Jim could stop him. Spock glanced at the screen. Then at Jim, then back at the screen.

β€œI am not even certain that is possible.”

β€œWell.”

Spock shook his head. β€œAnd I certainly do not have…” He stopped and looked reproachfully at Jim. β€œWhich, of course, you know.”

Jim shrugged guiltily. β€œI know. But, well, it, they, it’s kind of fascinating.”

β€œFascinating.”

β€œAnd hot.”

β€œBut, Jim, they have invented parts of me that I simply do not—”

β€œI know.” Jim grinned. β€œBelieve me I know.”

Spock gave him another look. β€œThey do seem to have your character down correctly.”

Jim narrowed his eyes. β€œHow so?”

β€œThe begging, the whimpering, and the—”

Jim snatched his PADD back. β€œOkay. Enough of that. It’s time to quit and go to bed.”

Spock took the PADD back, swiped his finger over the screen, and then handed it back to Jim, who noticed the page had disappeared, and it was back to his Starfleet homepage. β€œThat is enough of that.”

β€œSpoilsport.”

β€œIf you want to know about the ways we β€˜get it on’, you will only have to wait ten minutes until we reach our quarters.”

Jim grinned. β€œI know.” They fell into step beside each other. β€œI don’t beg.”

Spock arched a brow.

β€œMuch.”

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14 responses to “Flash Fic Friday, August 02, 2019”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Oooh! That WAS fun. And funny. And sweet and hot. You hit all the right notes. Well done and thanks for a smile to start my day!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks! It was indeed!

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  2. jj (still laughing) (which parts???) Avatar

    Ok. I am so super jealous I can’t breathe.
    That was absolutely THE ULTIMATE BEST prompt ever in the history of humankind. And you, of course, fleshed it out for all it was worth.
    I now have a brand new favorite flash. I may have to print this one out and frame it.
    And take it down when company comes.
    I can’t praise it enough. The words haven’t been invented yet.

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    1. jj (just repost this one every Friday for awhile) Avatar

      (how in the world did you EVER forget this one? I’d have been on pins and needles waiting for it to drop.)

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      1. eveningstar10 Avatar
        eveningstar10

        I have no recollection of prompting anything… except in the recesses of my dreams. Lol!

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    2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      πŸ˜€ thanks my friend! ❀ it was definitely a fun one to write. And which parts indeed!!!

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  3. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    hahaha! I loved this!
    Made me smile and laugh! Perfect!
    Jim, you do beg πŸ˜€

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      yes of course he does! πŸ™‚

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  4. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    That really made me laugh. Jim getting caught reading fanfics and jumping a mile! Lol! I can so picture that. Spock’s reaction was perfect. Telling Jim that he begs and whimpers. Lol. The final response by Spock to Jim’s denial that he begs…. β€œMuch”!!! Lol!
    Loved this! Great prompt!
    ❀

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Says the one who came up with it! LOL
      thank you

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    2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Oh and it’s Jim saying he doesn’t beg much in response to Spock’s dubious raised eyebrow πŸ˜€

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  5. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    I did? πŸ€·πŸ»β€β™€οΈ Well go me! Lol!
    And oh… my bad… Jim saying β€œmuch” makes it even funnier! πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜†

    I just reread this flashfic. Somehow this notification appeared on my other email. Now I want to see what they get up to, to β€œget it on” once they get to their quarters. πŸ˜‰ ❀️

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Well…it was slightly different than I wrote but essentially the same…

      – Jim, who is pining for Spock discovers there is a whole genre of 23rd century fan fiction written about a K/S relationship. Spock discovers Jim reading them.

      I took out the pining part and made them already a couple

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  6. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Loving it!
    β€οΈπŸ––

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