100 Words (this one continued from 01/26/18

When all Spock did was stare at him wordlessly over the chess board, Jim knew bitter disappointment and heartache. So, it was true. All his feelings only belonged to him. Spock didn’t feel that way about him. And really, Jim should have known. Spock had broken up with Uhura months ago, right after their return to Yorktown after Altamid. It had seemed they would reconcile, and then they hadn’t.

Jim had hoped. But when nothing came from Spock, he decided to make his declaration. And all Spock did was stare at him open-mouthed, like a fish.

“Forget it.”

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6 responses to “100 Words (this one continued from 01/26/18”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Oh. Heartbroken!!
    The emotion you pack into just 100 words.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      I do try!

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  2. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    Oh my heart! Yes, heartbroken! Oh Jim :,(

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      I know poor sweetie

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    On poor Jim! He opened up his heart and declared his love for Spock, only for Spock to sit there dumbfounded across from him. Spock’s speechlessness makes Jim think that the feeling is not reciprocated! So to cover his pain he tries to brush it off and say forget it. But is Jim reading Spock’s reaction correctly? Tell me that there will be a continuation of this please! Heartbreaking tale! ❤

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yes, next friday it will continue

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