Bombay (Bombaby) Conclusion

Here it is folks, the end for now (if there is enough clamoring there will be a second fic)

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Spock’s breath hitched and his arms came around the man, pulling him close. And all at once that connection he’d felt seemed to ignite.

Jim pulled back to look at Spock’s face. ā€œThat’s pretty cool? Do you feel that?ā€

ā€œI do, T’hy’la.ā€

ā€œThat’s a Vulcan word?’

Spock nodded. ā€œYes. Iā€”ā€

Jim stepped out of Spock’s arm and he had to fight to keep himself from seizing hold of Jim to draw him back.

ā€œWe should talk,ā€ Jim said. ā€œIs that food I smell?ā€

ā€œI had brought home my dinner and left it in the hallway when I discovered someone had accessed my door.ā€

To Spock’s surprise, Jim laughed.

ā€œUh, yeah. Sorry. I did get permission though. If you want to talk to the guy out front.ā€ Jim moved over to the door, opened it, and picked up the to-go bags Spock had left there. ā€œYou can go ahead and eat, if you want.’

Spock took the bags from Jim and brought them to the kitchenette. ā€œAre you hungry?ā€

ā€œI’m always hungry.ā€

Spock got out two plates as Jim perched on a small stood next to where Spock prepared their food.

ā€œYou must have a lot of questions.ā€

ā€œI do, yes.ā€ Spock’s gaze to meet Jim’s. ā€œThe most important one is, are you all right?ā€

ā€œYes, thanks to you. I can’tā€¦ā€ And here Jim’s voice cracked. He closed his eyes for a moment and Spock couldn’t stop himself for reaching for Jim’s hand. He was pleased when Jim allowed him to hold it. ā€œI can’t tell you how grateful I am. I spent way too long in cat form.ā€

ā€œI am gratified that your family was able to assist you.ā€

ā€œYou bringing me to them was definitely the right thing to do, but I’m sorry they hit you. Are you okay?ā€

ā€œI am satisfactory. I do wish I would have been able to stay.ā€

ā€œThe family unit is very protective of our status,ā€ Jim replied.

ā€œAnd you are safe? Those that were afterā€”ā€

ā€œThey’ve been taken care of for the moment. My family has some powerful Federation allies. You don’t need to fear them anymore, Spock. They’ve been neutralized.ā€

Spock didn’t think that sounded very good but he also thought he probably shouldn’t ask too many questions. If Jim said they were no longer a threat, then he believed him.

ā€œI guess at some point my miraculous reemergence as being alive will come out,ā€ Jim was saying. ā€œI don’t know what that will mean for my Starfleet career or really anything. It’s strange not being Human for five years.ā€

Spock put a plate in front of him. ā€œEat.ā€

Jim gave him a smile. ā€œThank you. For this and for everything. And if it’s not too weird, I really want to get to know you better. A lot better.ā€

Spock exhaled slowly. ā€œIt is not too weird. I would like that as well.ā€

ā€œYeah?ā€ Jim squeezed his hand, released it and picked up his fork. ā€œSo, uh, what does T’hy’la mean?ā€

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15 responses to “Bombay (Bombaby) Conclusion”

  1. Kristbethke Avatar

    Heh. Yeah Spock. What does it mean??
    I love it. I love the emotional vulnerability and the honest and openness.
    This whole Fic was a ride from start to finish! Well done my friend. I really enjoyed it.

    And you KNOW I’m down for a sequel. Always. Especially to see what come next here in this AU. šŸ‘

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks šŸ™‚
      It’ll be fun to get it up on AO3 if only so it can be read all at once. Not sure it will make any more sense! LOL
      It’s a mess though so it’ll be a while until I can!

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  2. j Avatar

    I don’t mean to diminish anything you’ve written in the past at all.

    But this may be the most absolutely perfect thing you’ve ever written. For short version, I mean. I mean….ah heck, I have about 25 of yours tied for first place best ever. So this joins them.

    Anyway, those pictures are PERFECT!! I mean, bravo perfect!

    I love this. Can’t wait for you to get it out there to the masses. I mean, spirk cat month was like last month, right? This tops them all! (And no, I didn’t read any of the others. But I have GREAT gut instincts! No seriously. SHUT UP!)

    More please. Consider me way beyond whatever level mere clamoring is on, for more please! It’s a need.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Thank you! I am happy you think so. I sometimes feared it was a little convoluted.
      As soon as it is reviewed for the multiple errors I know it has it can go up!
      And yes I finitely thinks a second part will be needed

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  3. eveningstar10 Avatar

    Love it! This is a lovely conclusion to ā€œthis partā€ of their story! (Notice what I did there! Consider that a beginning of clamoring!) I’m glad that Jim feels the connection between them as well! They certainly have a lot to talk over. I can’t imagine poor Jim having been trapped in cat form for all those years! He never knew if he’d be stuck that way forever or not. He needs emotional healing and Spock certainly is the one to help him with it! Yes Spock, what is T’hy’la?!
    Looking forward to seeing these two once again, as they reunite as humanoids! Cue the puppy🐶 dog šŸ•eyes šŸ‘€!!!
    ā¤ļøšŸ’ššŸ˜˜šŸ––šŸˆšŸ±

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yes they definitely need some time to relate as humanoids together!

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  4. feenani Avatar

    Heck, yeah! I’m definitely clamoring for a sequel. šŸ¤ž

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thank you so much

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  5. Celestial1 Avatar

    I am woman-hear me clamor….

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      LOL thank you

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  6. Jay Avatar
    Jay

    ā¤ļø sad its over but it was so so good! I could read more forever lol

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      thanks šŸ™‚
      I am not so sad lol

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  7. j Avatar

    That picture of Chris is just perfect to go with the pic of Bombaby! So believable!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yes I think so too
      I plan/hope to use it when I get it up on AO3

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      1. j Avatar

        I wish I had photoshop. I’ve been trying for weeks to get you your bombay cat pic with bombay sapphire colored eyes. I just can’t get it to work in MS paint. 😦

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