Eveningstar had suggested:
“I would like to suggest a Kelvin universe flash where Jimโs motivation or actions are doubted by everyone except Spock. Oh and Spock and Jim have yet to enter into a relationship, they are just friendsโฆso far. Spock defends Jim and shows Jim his absolute loyalty! Jim puts his faith and fate in Spockโs hands.”
This isn’t quite that but I tried to make it have close enough elements. She also suggested: Another idea is a flash where Jim and Spock are in a damaged shuttle or life pod that is losing power, as they await a possible rescue. The only way for Spock to survive is going into a Vulcan healing trance to save oxygen. Jim obviously canโt do that without help from bonding with Spock.
I am working on this idea but it’s slightly more involved now than I wanted for a flash so I will likely write it as a one-shot to be published on AO3 in the future.
So anyway, here is today’s flash….

Jim waited until just about everyone else had shuffled out of the conference. All the admirals and their assistants. And many of Jimโs own crew members as well as colleagues.
Jim watched them all chattering as they exited. He felt a renewed sense of peace. And a little hot and sweaty honestly. He tugged at the collar of his dress uniform.
Uhura stopped briefly to say something to Spock, but then she moved on too.
In the end, the only two left were himself and Spock. And Spock lingered, Jim supposed, because heโd had a sense that Jim wanted to speak with him. They were often in sync this way.
Jim smiled when Spock approached him. โGlad thatโs over.โ
โIndeed.โ
Jim glanced away for a moment, distracted by passersby. He looked back to Spock. โListen, I wanted to thank you for what you said in there.” He shook his head. “Even Bones seemed to have doubts. That you believed in me, when practically no one else did, I justโฆthank you. It meant so much.โ
โIt was only the truth,โ Spock said simply. โI knew that you could not have done what was implied. And now everyone else knows too.โ
Jimโs smile broadened. โThanks to you. You swayed them.โ
Spock inclined his head. โAnd now what will you do with the shore leave we have been granted here?โ
He blew out a breath. โI donโt even know. Iโve felt such relief that I honestly made no plans.โ Jim laughed. โRight now, Iโm starving and would love to just have a nice celebratory dinner.โ
Spock hesitated only briefly. โI know a place that will meet your needs if you are amenable to me joining you.โ
โAre you kidding? Iโd love that.โ
โThen, shall we?โ
Jim accompanied Spock out of the building and down the street to a resort area with a beach and many restaurants facing the ocean there. He directed Jim to one on the corner, dark and intimate.
They were seated at a table for two right by the window. There was artificial candlelight and everything. It struck Jim as pretty romantic.
He bit his lip.
Theyโd passed many crowded, noisy restaurants. Some with members of their own crew, yet Spock had brought them there.
Jim looked up from his menu and realized Spock was watching him.
It could be that Spock knew after the events of what had just occurred, Jim wouldnโt really want to be surrounded by large crowds.
Or it could be that he was trying to tell Jim something.
He took a chance.
โSpock, this is a really nice place. Makes me feelโฆcozy and romantic.โ
Spock did not immediately reply so Jim had a moment where he thought he might have gotten it wrong after all.
But Spock wasnโt ever really blatant with anything. He liked subtly a little too much for Jimโs tastes. But he guessed that was just who Spock was.
He continued on.
โI think, maybe, thatโs what you intended?โ Jim exhaled slowly. โI hope it is.โ
When Spock looked down at the space in front of him, Jim tried to hide his disappointment. He had gotten it wrong. Spock had merely thought he wanted a quiet place after all the mess that had been Jimโs life lately.
Jim started thinking of what he could say to take it all back. Some way he could save them both from embarrassment.
โI am relieved.โ
Jimโs gaze rose quickly to Spockโs face.
โI feared my interest was not reciprocated.โ
Jim reached for Spockโs hand and was happy when Spock placed his hand in Jimโs.
โSame,โ he whispered.
โJim, may I ask you to spend your shore leave with me?โ
โMy cup runneth over.โ
Spockโs eyebrow shot up.
โYes, Spock. Iโll definitely spend it with you.โ
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10 responses to “Flash Fic, February 19, 2021”
Oh this! I love the subtly of it. The just skimming the surface. And yet itโs so clear how much Spock cares for him. How much Jim wants Spock. And how they have each otherโs backs. Lovely!
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thank you
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I liked this and I look forward to the other one ๐
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thanks
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I read your prompt and panicked. My thought was, that is complicated and I would have panicked!
And THIS is why you have the following you have. You cut right to the core of of the prompt and wove this beautiful flash. Great job! Elegant in every line. I could practically see them sitting there, see their faces – well, especially Jim’s. To go from such stress of an inquiry to the relief and joy of this dinner.
Great prompt, great flash!
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I had a panicked moment too, lol. I think many times folks don’t realize that “flashes” are supposed to be quick and uncomplicated! This one had me pulling my hair out until I decided I could just have the aftermath scene and not everything before. Whew.
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Yeah, well, we both know I give the WORST most complicated prompts of anyone, so I stand guilty as charged!!!! But it sure is fun to watch you wiggle your way out of the complications to give us quality!
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It is true that usually yours are much more complicated than Jim asks Spock for a date or something like that LOL ๐
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Loved this flash. It hits the mark very well. Love the way you approached it, just showing the aftermath! Thatโs why youโre the writer! Sorry, not sorry my prompt was so complicated. Lol!
Youโve shown that Spock had absolute faith in Jim and was able to prove that Jim was innocent of whatever people believed he did. Jimโs recognition that Spock believed in him when others did not, is exactly what Iโd asked for. Then the very promising dinner and start to a shore leave is just icing on the cake! Love their declaration of mutual interest in one another. Thank you very much Ivan. โค๏ธ๐๐๐
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I love what you did with this prompt! Because you managed to focus on the most important part – Spock’s unwavering faith in Jim and his support even when nobody else believes in his innocence. The restaurant choice and the dinner is giving it the perfect and fitting ending. So lovely!
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