A little TOS, post-mission, pre-Motion Picture

βAre you going to stop him?β
Jim smiled faintly. βStop him? No.β
Bones made a frustrated sound. βWhy not, Jim? Youβre just going to let him walk away? Leave Starfleet? Walk away from you?β
Jim looked at Bones. In the last year of the five year mission, Bones had been looking older, more haggard. They probably all did. The last five years had taken their toll on all of them. He wasnβt at all surprised Bones had announced to him that he planned to retire. He was done with space, he said.
βYes.β
βI donβt get it, Jim. Why donβt you call him back right now?β Bones grimaced. βI can still see the back of that stupid hobgoblin. With his Vulcan hearingββ
βNo, Bones.β
βBut donβt you want to tell him how you feel?β
At this Jim deflated some. βIβm guessing he knows and is leaving anyway.β
Bones made an ugly face. βWait. What? He knows?β
βIβve not made my feelings a secret for the last year. I canβt give Spock what he wants.β
βWhich is?β
βA life devoid of drama and emotions.β Jim shook his head. βThatβs not me. We both know it.β Jim shrugged. βSo.β
βAnd what do you intend to do now?β Bones demanded. βIf you arenβt going after him.β
βIβm not. Why are you so passionate about it anyway? Youβve never even liked Spock.β
Bones scowled. βWell. I donβt dislike him. And if he made you happyβ¦but now, well, youβre saying he doesnβt?β
Jim put his hand on Bonesβ shoulder. βIβm saying, let it go. Iβm not going to force Spock to be with me, Bones. And as for me? I have a promotion ceremony to attend.β
βStill canβt believe youβre going to be Admiral Kirk.β
βMe either. But I had little choice. Come on, Bones. Thereβs time for us to have a drink.β Jim paused. βI really need one.β
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10 responses to “Flash Fic, 02/07/2020”
Oh my heart π¦
breaking my heart here Ivan
but yeah, I get it. Poor Jim, wanting Spock but having to let him go.
Great flash today, Ivan.
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Yep had to let him go, sadly, but Jim is strong
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Ack! Feelings! But gah yeah. No other way. I get it. But come on Jim!
Killing me but oh so good!
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Yep I am going with total “canon” here!
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This is significant and quality writing. That is professional screenplay writing.
I know that’s not your point, but line after line just screamed that at me.
You should be employed a few miles away, you know. You’re the real deal.
I was in a town called Greenland once, going to Galveston by the back roads and making the trip as interesting as the destination. Downtown on the little square, there was a guy who had a thriving business selling old US medical technology, like bypass machines, to 3rd world countries, who would consider it cutting edge gold where they were. I just didn’t know that existed, and certainly not on a tiny town square in the country.
But he said something I’ll never forget.
“All the best plumbers are heart surgeons. Because that’s all heart surgery is.”
You’re a heart surgeon stuck in a plumber’s world.
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And yeah, the fic is right on. And as soon as I saw the pic in the email, my first thought was – chuckle, TOS. Isn’t that funny? That would never have crossed my mind 3 years ago – I’d have thought Shat. But now I just see “TOS.”
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That’s real progress! And also good you saw the picture! π
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That’s a very kind comment β€
I just write them from the heart, so I think that actually the heart surgeon comment is particularly relevant. I've had people wonder how I can write for the same couple/characters over and over and that's how. Out of love. I love other characters, other couples, etc, but not like them. It's weird, I guess, but there it is.
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I know itβs TOS and that had to have happened for the first TOS movie to happen as it did. But guhhh that hurt. ); Poor Jim… just making assumptions! Iβm glad heβs got Bones! β€
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well…considering the way Spock is at the beginning of TMP, I don’t think Jim is wrong here. But yeah, sucks π¦
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