Flash Fic, 02/07/2020

A little TOS, post-mission, pre-Motion Picture

β€œAre you going to stop him?”

Jim smiled faintly. β€œStop him? No.”

Bones made a frustrated sound. β€œWhy not, Jim? You’re just going to let him walk away? Leave Starfleet? Walk away from you?”

Jim looked at Bones. In the last year of the five year mission, Bones had been looking older, more haggard. They probably all did. The last five years had taken their toll on all of them. He wasn’t at all surprised Bones had announced to him that he planned to retire. He was done with space, he said.

β€œYes.”

β€œI don’t get it, Jim. Why don’t you call him back right now?” Bones grimaced. β€œI can still see the back of that stupid hobgoblin. With his Vulcan hearing—”

β€œNo, Bones.”

β€œBut don’t you want to tell him how you feel?”

At this Jim deflated some. β€œI’m guessing he knows and is leaving anyway.”

Bones made an ugly face. β€œWait. What? He knows?”

β€œI’ve not made my feelings a secret for the last year. I can’t give Spock what he wants.”

β€œWhich is?”

β€œA life devoid of drama and emotions.” Jim shook his head. β€œThat’s not me. We both know it.” Jim shrugged. β€œSo.”

β€œAnd what do you intend to do now?” Bones demanded. β€œIf you aren’t going after him.”

β€œI’m not. Why are you so passionate about it anyway? You’ve never even liked Spock.”

Bones scowled. β€œWell. I don’t dislike him. And if he made you happy…but now, well, you’re saying he doesn’t?”

Jim put his hand on Bones’ shoulder. β€œI’m saying, let it go. I’m not going to force Spock to be with me, Bones. And as for me? I have a promotion ceremony to attend.”

β€œStill can’t believe you’re going to be Admiral Kirk.”

β€œMe either. But I had little choice. Come on, Bones. There’s time for us to have a drink.” Jim paused. β€œI really need one.”

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10 responses to “Flash Fic, 02/07/2020”

  1. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    Oh my heart 😦
    breaking my heart here Ivan
    but yeah, I get it. Poor Jim, wanting Spock but having to let him go.
    Great flash today, Ivan.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yep had to let him go, sadly, but Jim is strong

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  2. Kris Avatar

    Ack! Feelings! But gah yeah. No other way. I get it. But come on Jim!
    Killing me but oh so good!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Yep I am going with total “canon” here!

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  3. j Avatar
    j

    This is significant and quality writing. That is professional screenplay writing.

    I know that’s not your point, but line after line just screamed that at me.

    You should be employed a few miles away, you know. You’re the real deal.

    I was in a town called Greenland once, going to Galveston by the back roads and making the trip as interesting as the destination. Downtown on the little square, there was a guy who had a thriving business selling old US medical technology, like bypass machines, to 3rd world countries, who would consider it cutting edge gold where they were. I just didn’t know that existed, and certainly not on a tiny town square in the country.

    But he said something I’ll never forget.

    “All the best plumbers are heart surgeons. Because that’s all heart surgery is.”

    You’re a heart surgeon stuck in a plumber’s world.

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    1. j Avatar
      j

      And yeah, the fic is right on. And as soon as I saw the pic in the email, my first thought was – chuckle, TOS. Isn’t that funny? That would never have crossed my mind 3 years ago – I’d have thought Shat. But now I just see “TOS.”

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      1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
        ivansfanfiction

        That’s real progress! And also good you saw the picture! πŸ˜€

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    2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      That’s a very kind comment ❀
      I just write them from the heart, so I think that actually the heart surgeon comment is particularly relevant. I've had people wonder how I can write for the same couple/characters over and over and that's how. Out of love. I love other characters, other couples, etc, but not like them. It's weird, I guess, but there it is.

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  4. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    I know it’s TOS and that had to have happened for the first TOS movie to happen as it did. But guhhh that hurt. ); Poor Jim… just making assumptions! I’m glad he’s got Bones! ❀

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      well…considering the way Spock is at the beginning of TMP, I don’t think Jim is wrong here. But yeah, sucks 😦

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