100 Words Continuation, 05/15/2018

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The condo was dark and silent.

Spock realized he was clenching his fists and he forced himself to release them.

“Jim?”

He glanced toward the rain-splattered windows overlooking the city, trying to use the little bit of light coming in to see if the condo was truly empty.

Then he heard just the slightest snuffle and he could breathe again.

Spock set aside his traveler’s bag and moved forward in the darkness. Turning on the lights might be preferable but first Spock had to be sure the brightness would not be unwelcome.

He stepped toward the windows lining the one wall of the front room.

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8 responses to “100 Words Continuation, 05/15/2018”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Gah! Killing me! So so good!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      🙂

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  2. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    “Then he heard just the slightest snuffle and he could breathe again.”

    Oh oh oh! What’s going on?! I need more! So good!

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  3. ivansfanfiction Avatar
    ivansfanfiction

    🙂

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  4. Kati Ignatieva Avatar
    Kati Ignatieva

    At this point I start wondering what kind of creature Jim is… so very intriguing!!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Interesting speculation but Jim is, alas,all too human

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  5. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    What is going on? Why is Spock threading so carefully around Jim. At least Jim is there! I need several hundred words to explain this. ❤

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      More to come on Friday

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