Super Flash 8/17/2019

“Spock, I-I know there isn’t much time, but…I love you. I’ve wanted to tell you forever. And it never seemed right. So if,,,”

Phaser blast right next to him.

“Jim, I am sorry. I do not…”

Heart thundering, Jim nodded. ‘”It’s okay. I know. I just had to…”

“Captain, move!”

The wall next to him exploded just as Jim leaped away. He fell to the ground a and lost consciousness.

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12 responses to “Super Flash 8/17/2019”

  1. Kris Avatar

    Ack! So much emotion in so few words. You kill me dead. A phaser to the heart.

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      Shooting at the walls of heartache bang, bang
      I am the warrior
      Well, I am the warrior
      And heart to heart you’ll win
      If you survive, the warrior, the warrior

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      1. Kris Avatar

        Love. This! Lol. Well done my friend.

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  2. eveningstar10 Avatar
    eveningstar10

    Well Ivan you can’t expect me not to ask for more of the story. Oh my heart! What’s happening? Are they both ok? Both dead? Super flash indeed!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      The beauty of a super flash…LOL
      They are not dead

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  3. yaoichan12 Avatar
    yaoichan12

    Um excuse me? Where is the rest?!?! You can’t leave it like that!!! We need more!

    Pretty please? Pretty pretty please?

    This was short and so fucking good!

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      I can, actually! LOL Well…we shall see…maybe

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      1. eveningstar10 Avatar
        eveningstar10

        Pretty Please 🥺 🙏 !! 😘

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  4. JJ Avatar

    “Jim, I am sorry. I do not…”

    Heart thundering, Jim nodded. ‘”It’s okay. I know. I just had to…”

    See Jim? LET SPOCK FINISH!!!!
    (I got in trouble in meetings all the time for this. Yes, when all those people tried to proclaim love for me.)

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    1. ivansfanfiction Avatar
      ivansfanfiction

      There’s that gnat again, refusing to let others speak!
      Well to be fair, they are under attack in a corridor, not at a meeting, as you were, so therefore, that’s why you got into trouble

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      1. JJ Avatar

        You don’t know. You weren’t there. There coulda been people attacking me!!!!! As you know, music teachers are just easy verbal targets from the “real” teachers. We get in trouble ALL the time. Or was that just me?

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      2. ivansfanfiction Avatar
        ivansfanfiction

        Snort!

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