This is most definitely more than 100 words, but here is the conclusion of The Love Confession as I have titled it.
“Should probably clean up,” Jim murmured lazily.
“Later. We can shower together.”
He smiled. “Love the sound of that. Bones is right.”
“I find that hard to process. About what?”
“I really am an idiot.”
“Perhaps,” Spock acknowledged. “But you are my idiot.”
“Somehow that doesn’t make me feel any better.”
“If you had allow me to speak—”
“Yeah, I know. But it was taking you a long time and I—”
“You are doing it again. I can hardly get a word in.”
“Well.” Jim huffed a laugh. “Anyway. I meant what I said.”
“Which part?”
Jim sighed. “You know.”
“I do not. You will have to tell me.”
“I love you,” Jim mumbled.
“What? I cannot hear you.”
“You have superior hearing. You can hear me!”
“What did you say, Jim?”
Jim was pretty sure Spock was laughing at him.
“I’m in love with you.”
Okay it still hurt a little somewhere deep inside to say it. Your name wasn’t Jim Kirk if you gave your love so freely. It hurt deep. You felt deeper.
Spock turned him in his arms and leaned over Jim as he fastened his lips to Jim’s. “And you are my life.”
Jim eyed him. “Does that mean you love me or not?”
Spock nodded.
“You will have to tell me,” Jim returned.
Spock’s lips quirked. “I am most emphatically—”
“Emphatically is a good word.” Jim grinned. “Maybe you should use that word every time you—”
“Kroykah.”
“Does that mean love?”
“It most certainly does not.”
Jim rubbed his thumb across Spock’s bottom lip. “You’ve made me the happiest of men.”
“You have made me happy as well.”
“Yeah? Because making a Vulcan happy is quite a feat, you know.”
“Indeed. And in case it was not clear before—”
“Oh it was clear.”
Spock sighed. He actually sighed. “I love you.”
Jim opened his mouth and Spock put his hand over it.
“No more. You try my patience.” Spock released him and then stood, pulling Jim up with him. “Shower.”
Jim nodded and put his arms around Spock’s neck. “Best day ever.”
Spock closed his eyes and leaned his forehead against Jim’s. “And more best days to come.”
May 7, 2018 at 4:50 am
Perfect conclusion. On every level.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish and I absolutely loved this ending!
Thank you!
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May 7, 2018 at 7:40 am
thanks ❤
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May 7, 2018 at 5:13 am
Yes, perfect perfect conclusion!
I loved this from the angsty start to the fluffy ending! it was amazing and had me hooked with each 100 words you posted!
thank you for sharing this with us! you are amazing!! ❤ ❤ ❤
Jim opened his mouth and Spock put his hand over it.
“No more. You try my patience.” Spock released him and then stood, pulling Jim up with him. “Shower.” <-loved LOL well, i loved every part but this had me giggling
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May 7, 2018 at 7:40 am
And thank you for sticking it out
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May 7, 2018 at 10:56 am
This conclusion was indeed perfect! Spock agreeing that Jim is perhaps an idiot, but then saying: but you are my idiot. That made me smile. Spock isn’t above teasing Jim. Jim is still not letting Spock speak, but this time Spock calls him on it.
Spock insisting that Jim tell him he loves him out loud is so cute. Jim, even now, feels uncomfortable with the “L” word. Lol! Spock’s confession that Jim is his life is beautiful, but then it’s Jim’s turn to insist that Spock say the word love. But he interrupts him anyway.
Spock has to resort to covering Jim’s mouth so he can get a turn to speak. Lol! Jim isn’t changing anytime soon! Which is just fine by me and Spock, apparently!
Thank you for this angst but happy ending story.
❤
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May 7, 2018 at 11:04 am
A babbling Jim is the best!
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May 7, 2018 at 3:19 pm
The plot in itself, the sweet torture of reading the story in tiny bits of just 100 words, the perfect conclusion, the right mix of hotness and humour… yet another proof that Ivan is the best
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May 7, 2018 at 6:56 pm
thank you so much ❤
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